Sand Castles – Commentary Po.em

Aren’t we just sand castles? 

In the cosmic sandbox of life

Each turret tells a story 

Each wave changes the outcome

Another commentary po.em from  Lorraine and myself.  Her words are italicIzed.  More of her words are located at http://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com and http://25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com

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4 thoughts on “Sand Castles – Commentary Po.em”

      1. I’ve been playing with the thread from deniel — you’re so right about the shift in emphasis, change in emotions created by taking a line and moving it towards it’s “perfect” partner.

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