Opium Lies

Best served vaguely

Flowers arrangement 

Marking passing future 

Few drops infused

Enough minutes and alcohol 

Waiting for relief 

Lies lived end

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5 thoughts on “Opium Lies”

  1. Great job with this Mark 🙂

    I like how you’ve stripped it down to essences and and worked this is such a simple yet powerful way. It almost has the ghost of Bukowski growling through this.

    And the ending is spectacular. As you’ve noted to Maria in the comments, certain bite indeed.

    Thanks for playing the Sunday writing prompt Mark!

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