But beware
Words are snares
Sprung in the darkness of lies
Deceit makes a cozy bed
Sweet dreams…
to awaken nightmarish
Poem constructed from comments featuring Lorraine (http://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com) and myself. Please stop by her site. ☺
other examples
https://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com/2017/01/25/commentary-po-em-bones-of-our-ancestors/
https://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com/2017/01/28/conceit-of-lies/
https://any1mark66.wordpress.com/2017/01/25/midnight-mirror/?preview=true
another magical piece …. always a delight 🙂
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She works magic with my words and mind. ☺
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🙂
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Very good, if I might say so myself. The way in which words weave through comment threads into poetics is fascinating.
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It really was two puzzle pieces. I was really seeing if I could get one for my other site. I even had room for another word. 😀 We may be on to something here
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