Return – Six Sentence Stories 

“It came back!” I stare.

Shotgun this time.

Gone.

Legs fail at first.  Then grab hold.

Tail wags.

Puppy returns again.

written as part of a challenge called Six Sentence Stories, details are available at https://unchartedblogdotorg.wordpress.com/2017/02/26/sss-cue-of-the-week-2/

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20 thoughts on “Return – Six Sentence Stories ”

  1. very cool Six. In fact, cool in a relatively rare way, i.e. my enjoyment (and appreciation) grew with reading the Comments (and Replies) that followed the story.
    ‘Legs fail at first. Then grab hold.
    Tail wags’
    a whole bunch ‘o imagery

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    1. I try writing in 21 words or less on this blog. It makes for interesting word choices and implying things. I really had fun with the idea of the returnee being a dog. Thanks for the kind words.

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